Series Sunday presents: Dani Harper’s Grim Series

TITLE: Storm Warrior
SERIES #: Grim #1
CHARACTERS: Rhys & Morgan
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
PUBLICATION DATE: August 6, 2013
ORDER LINKS: Amazon | B&N
BOOK SYNOPSIS:
Enslaved for millennia by the masters of the Welsh faery realm, the fierce Celtic warrior Rhys is doomed to wander the earth forever. But when a brave beauty unwittingly breaks the enchantment, he is drawn into a strange new world…and an all-consuming desire.

Sensible Morgan doesn’t believe in magic—until a mysterious being saves her from a fate worse than death, and life as she knows it changes forever. Now the man of her dreams has become flesh and blood, igniting a spark in Morgan’s soul which science cannot explain. But even a love that transcends time may not be strong enough to withstand the power of an ancient curse.

From the best-selling author of Changeling Moon, this stirring novel of passion and magic launches an addictive new series for fans of paranormal romance.

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TITLE: Storm Born
SERIES #: Grim #2
CHARACTERS: Aidan & Brooke
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
PUBLICATION DATE: March 18, 2014
ORDER LINKS: Amazon | B&N
BOOK SYNOPSIS:
From the bestselling author of Changeling Moon, this thrilling and sensual novel adds a new chapter to Dani Harper’s Celtic folklore–themed Grim Series.

Kidnapped on his wedding day in the twelfth century and forced into a thousand years of servitude by a cold-hearted faery princess, rugged blacksmith Aidan dreams of nothing but revenge on his captor. Then the spell of a beautiful witch awakens him to the present day—and a passionate desire. But to build a future, he must first confront his past…

Modern witch and magic-shop owner Brooke doesn’t think her life is missing anything, until a wayward enchantment lands a brooding medieval blacksmith in her spell room—and in her arms. Yet even after their passion proves to be truly magical, Aidan’s first commitment is to vengeance. Now Brooke must team up with friends and ancient warriors alike—and push her own powers to their limits—to save her love from the wrath of an evil fae.

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TITLE: Storm Warned
SERIES #: Grim #3
CHARACTERS: Liam & Cari
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
PUBLICATION DATE: March 31, 2015
ORDER LINKS: Amazon | B&N
BOOK SYNOPSIS:
When Caris’s unearthly musical talent attracts the attention of the Wild Hunt, the Welsh farm girl is stolen away to serve as a faery grim, a herald of death. Two centuries later, she’s finally escaped back to the human world—and into the present-day life of a reclusive and heartbroken American musician.

Music was Liam’s whole life—until a crushing betrayal left him desperate to flee the public eye. Yet long-dormant passions awaken after a powerful storm strands a beautiful, strong-willed woman on his isolated farm. When a Fae prince bent on ruling both human and Faery realms threatens Caris’s life, Liam must decide if he can finally believe in love again, not just for her sake—but for the sake of two worlds.

From the best-selling author of Changeling Moon, this sweeping and passionate story of paranormal romance follows two souls from centuries apart who lost everything . . . and found that only love can save them.

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TITLE: Storm Crossed
SERIES #: Grim #4
CHARACTERS: Trahern & Lissy
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
PUBLICATION DATE: January 9, 2018
ORDER LINKS: Amazon | B&N
BOOK SYNOPSIS:
The latest stand-alone novel in Dani Harper’s Grim Series will delight old and new fans alike, transporting them to the ancient fae realm beneath the modern human world, where magic rules and menace abounds…

Heir to a noble fae house, Trahern is forced to watch helplessly as his twin brother is cruelly changed into a grim—a death dog—as punishment for falling in love with the wrong person. Trahern doesn’t believe love exists, but he will do anything to keep his brother alive—even join the Wild Hunt and ride the night skies of the human world.

Lissy Santiago-Callahan believes in love but has no time for it. She’s busy juggling her career as an academic and her home life as a single mom to a young son with Asperger’s. Her hectic life in sleepy eastern Washington is made even more chaotic with the sudden arrival of a demanding fae and his unusual “dog.”

Mortal and immortal have nothing in common, and the attraction between Lissy and Trahern surprises them both. But when their desire places Lissy and her child in the path of a deadly faery feud, will the connection last, or will their separate worlds prove too great a divide?

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About the author:

Legend.  Lore. Love.  Magic. 

These are the hallmarks of Dani Harper’s award-winning tales of faeries, shapeshifters, ghosts, and more, for a mature audience. A former newspaper editor, Dani’s passion for all things supernatural led her to a second career writing fiction. There isn’t anything she likes better than exploring myths and legends from many cultures, which serve to inspire her sizzling and suspenseful stories.

A longtime resident of the Canadian north and southeastern Alaska, she now lives in rural Washington with her retired mountain-man husband. Together they do battle with runaway garden gnomes, rampant fruit trees, and a roving herd of predatory chickens.

The Stories

Harper’s first foray into fiction began with a series of successful wolf-shifter novels: CHANGELING MOON (2012 RITA finalist), CHANGELING DREAM, and CHANGELING DAWN. A darker werewolf tale bordering on urban fantasy followed: FIRST BITE. More recently she’s been bringing ancient faery legends into modern-day America with The Grim Series (STORM WARRIOR, a top ten pick by PUBLISHERS WEEKLY, STORM BOUNDSTORM WARNED, and STORM CROSSED (2019 Winner of PRISM for Urban Fantasy and 2019 Winner of the Golden Quill for Fantasy Romance). For those who love a ghostly love story, she wrote THE HOLIDAY SPIRIT, Book 1 of the Haunted Holiday Series.

 

 More on Dani

I have a very serious gardening habit, especially when it comes to flowers and trees. In January, my kitchen table gets buried under a large stack of seed catalogs. A month later, seedling trays and grow lights will take over every horizontal surface. I also adore animals of every kind, and once had a tiny farm in northern Canada with a herd of goats. I’ve been owned by a pug or two for many years (always rescues), and only my husband keeps me from turning into a crazy pug lady!

It’s far too late to prevent me from being a crazy chicken lady however – at present I’m mom to 29 hens and a couple of roosters. And yup, they all have names! (Priscilla, Wild Thing, Romeo, Olive, Lucy, Mrs. Beardsley, Cheeks…) Although friends and family threatened to get me a Christmas shirt saying: “I Was Normal a Dozen Chickens Ago”, I escaped that fate this year. I did get a pair of gnome salt and pepper shakers though — I have an entire colony of gnomes outside, standing guard over the raspberries and the rosebushes!

 

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Cover Reveal of Dani Harper’s Storm Crossed!!

The latest stand-alone novel in Dani Harper’s Grim Series will delight old and new fans alike, transporting them to the ancient fae realm beneath the modern human world, where magic rules and menace abounds . . .

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Heir to a noble fae house, Trahern is forced to watch helplessly as his twin brother is cruelly changed into a grim—a death dog—as punishment for falling in love with the wrong person. Trahern doesn’t believe love exists, but he will do anything to keep his brother alive—even join the Wild Hunt and ride the night skies of the human world.

Lissy Santiago-Callahan believes in love but has no time for it. She’s busy juggling her career as an academic and her home life as a single mom to a young son with Asperger’s. Her hectic life in sleepy Eastern Washington is made even more chaotic with the sudden arrival of a demanding fae and his unusual “dog.”

Mortal and immortal have nothing in common, and the attraction between Lissy and Trahern surprises them both. But when their desire places Lissy and her child in the path of a deadly faery feud, will the connection last, or will their separate worlds prove too great a divide?

Storm Crossed releases January 9th. It’s available for pre-order in Kinde eBook, paperback, and audio at https://www.amazon.com/Storm-Crossed-Grim-Book-4-ebook/dp/B073TTTGZD

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AVATAR DANI HARPER AUG 2017A little about Dani Harper 

 Legend, lore, love, and magic. These are the hallmarks of Dani Harper’s transformational tales of faeries, shapeshifters, ghosts, and more, for a mature audience.

A former newspaper editor, Dani’s passion for all things supernatural led her to a second career writing fiction. There isn’t anything she likes better than exploring myths and legends from many cultures, which serve to inspire her sizzling and suspenseful stories.

A longtime resident of the Canadian north and southeastern Alaska, she now lives in rural Washington with her retired mountain-man husband. Together they do battle with runaway garden gnomes, rampant fruit trees, and a roving herd of predatory chickens.

Dani Harper is the author of Storm Crossed, Storm Warned, Storm Bound, Storm Warrior (the Grim Series), as well as First Bite (Dark Wolf), for Montlake Romance. She is also the author of a Yuletide ghost story, The Holiday Spirit, plus a popular shapeshifter series, which includes Changeling Moon, Changeling Dream, and Changeling Dawn.

For more, visit her website | Amazon Author Page Facebook Twitter @Dani_Harper

 

Kelly reviews The Holiday Spirit by Dani Harper

holiday spiritTITLE: The Holiday Spirit
CHARACTERS: Galen McAllister & Kerri Tollbrook
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
PUBLICATION DATE: September 29, 2015
ORDER LINKS: Amazon

BOOK SYNOPSIS:
Dani Harper’s Christmas ghost story is BACK with all-new material. The characters have haunted their author into resurrecting her popular paranormal romance novella and expanding it into a full-length novel. Additional scenes and new details make THE HOLIDAY SPIRIT bigger, better … and badder!

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All she wants for Christmas is a ghost…

Writer Kerri Tollbrook spends her free time counseling the newly departed, but the tall, dark and handsome spirit she meets at the shopping mall claims he’s not dead. Is he just in denial? Or is something more sinister at work?

Firefighter Galen McAllister has felt like The Invisible Man ever since a malicious spell separated him from his still-living body. Kerri is the first person he’s met who can actually see him. Now if only he can get her to listen … because the nightmare creature that trapped him between two worlds isn’t finished!

REVIEW:

NUMBER OF HEARTS: 3

I didn’t read the original version of this story.  But I did enjoy this revised story that Ms. Harper wrote.  I liked Kerri and her ability to see and speak to ghost.   I really like Galen!!  Who doesn’t like a hot firefighter?     I loved their first encounter, it had me laughing.   

I enjoyed the love story and how it grew over the course of this book.   I do hope that this will not be the last time that we see these two.  I would like to know what happens to them in the future.  

If you are looking to add a little Christmas ghost story to your Fall reads I would suggest picking up a copy of The Holiday Spirit.  

Disclaimer:

I received a complimentary copy of this book from Dani Harper in exchange for an honest review. This review is my own opinion and not a paid review.

 

Disclaimer:
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Dani Harper in exchange for an honest review. This review is my own opinion and not a paid review.

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Audio Book Lovin’ Presents: Kelly’s interview with Dani Harper & Justine Eyre + a giveaway

Viviana, from Enchantress of Books and I am so excited to have Dani Harper and the awesome Justine Eyre our Audio Book Lovin’ Series.  

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Today I am talking to the ladies about Dani’s Grim series.   I have had the pleasure of listening to Justine narrate Dani’s amazing story and as always Justine blows me away with her amazing talents.  But enough about me and my love of all thing audiobooks (I will be talking more about this tomorrow).  Let me introduce you to the ladies. 

DANI HARPER AVATAR APRIL 2015Dani Harper is a former newspaper editor whose passion for all things supernatural led her to a second career writing paranormal fantasy. There isn’t anything she likes better than exploring myths and legends from many cultures, which serve to inspire her stories.

Love fairies? Dani’s new Grim Series is bringing Celtic faery legends into modern-day America: Storm Warrior, Storm Bound and Storm Warned. (Storm Warrior earned a starred review from Publishers Weekly.)

Die-hard werewolf fans will want to meet Dani’s unique take on shapeshifters: the Macleod clan in Changeling Moon, Changeling Dream, and Changeling Dawn. (Book 1, Changeling Moon, was a 2012 RITA finalist.) Need more shapeshifters? Try First Bite, a Dark Wolf story. Learn more at here Website | Facebook | Twitter | Pinterest | Goodreads

 

Justine EyreJustine Eyre is a classically trained actress who has narrated over three hundred audiobooks. With a prestigious Audie Award and five AudioFile Earphones Awards under her belt, Justine is multilingual and is known for her great facility with accents. She has appeared on stage in leading roles in King Lear and The Crucible, and has starring roles in four films on the indie circuit. Her recent television credits include Two and a Half Men and Mad Men.  Learn more about Justine here: Goodreads | Brilliance AudioTantor | Audible

 

Dani/Justine can you tell us how  the author/narrator relationship begin?

Dani:  Montlake let me know that Justine Eyre would be voicing the first book of my Grim Series, Storm Warrior. I didn’t have the opportunity of meeting her or speaking with her, but I immediately sought out samples of her narration work – and she was wonderful!  I was so happy (and honored) to have such an accomplished actress reading my story.

610YP95icdL._SL300_Even though I was certain it would be good, actually hearing the finished audiobook of Storm Warrior brought tears to my eyes. I was in awe! Justine did an amazing job of bringing my characters vividly to life (in fact, I remember wondering if she was part Fae herself!). Even better, she handled the intricate Welsh and Faery languages with an ease and a fluency that few people could have matched (certainly not me, LOL!).

My readers adore Justine’s narration of the stories too. So naturally, I’ve requested her as the narrator of each Grim novel since, and counted myself very fortunate that she’s graciously said “yes” each time. I just can’t imagine anyone else reading them aloud!

Justine:  Ms. Harper’s first title in her Grim Series was entrusted to me by Brilliance Audio and after reading the first few pages, I knew I was in for a treat! I felt that not only was it a story that I would love being in the studio with, it was a tale that I’d want as part of my personal bedside reading. The Holy Grail, for a narrator!

 

Brilliance Audio was kind enough to share an audio clip of Storm Warrior for us to share with you.   Enjoy. 

 

Dani, what sort of information do you provide Justine with prior to her starting the narrating process of one of your book(s)?

Dani: I do fill out some very basic forms and bare-bones questionnaires about characters and such, which I believe are shared with her. Mostly, I just want Justine to “read it as she feels it” – I’d never want to interfere with her creative process. Speaking of which, I’m dying to know just how she works her magic!

Justine, how do you go about selecting how each of the characters are going to sound like?

Justine: Dani writes in a very visual and beautifully descriptive way so coming up with voices for her characters was a completely organic process, I felt like I could kind of sidle into the shoes of each person and start using their voice. They read very much as three-dimensional, breathing beings. I tried to stay true to the text and then vocalized how these characters appeared to me, as the reader.

Along the lines of the previous question, how do you manage or what is your process of remembering what the character from a previous book sounds like when they reappear in a new book?

Justine: I am a nerd! I always take copious notes when prepping a title and looking back at those notes helps jog my memory. There are characters that never need that prompt so when I read that Ranyon made a reappearance, I had the biggest grin on my face, he is definitely a memorable personality. I wouldn’t mind having him live in my own garden!

Justine, tell us about the narrating process (i.e. do you read the book before narrating it? How long are the recording sessions per day? How long does it take for you to narrator a book?  If you make a mistake while recording, what happens?)

Justine: I always read a book first, paying strict attention to any clues the author has written, from dress (does this character always appear in jeans) to personality tics (is this one constantly flipping her hair, suffering from allergies, etc). Even though it is solely my voice that is fleshing out the words, I feel more prepared if I can envision the person, from flashing, twinkly eyes, down to scuffed boots.

My studio time varies for each title…per finished hour is always the go-to expression. For every hour that you listen to a completed audiobook, it has taken me anywhere from an hour and a half to two hours in studio to obtain. Yes, mistakes are made! Sometimes I flub a line and have to go back in and redo it, sometimes I will say something in a character’s voice and go, yikes, that didn’t sound right at all! I am both actor and director when in the studio and that director, whew, she is a task-master, let me tell you!

Justine, authors have writer’s caves, do narrators have something similar?

Justine: I love the image of the author’s writing cave! Yes, my working environment is similar though thanks to my builder hubby, my studio has a large, sound-proofed window out to the garden. So, I don’t lead a troglodytic existence, hurrah. Psychologically and physically, I love having natural light pouring in during daylight hours and knowing that night has fallen outside. Funny enough, I don’t get distracted by the window…we have had major weather changes, sudden rain squalls, huge wind gusts, and I am so wrapped up in the story that I remain completely unaware. I did know when we had a mini earthquake as my studio actually shook but apart from that, it is a world unto itself.

Dani:  I have a question that I’ve been dying to ask Justine myself – is there something in your background or experience that has helped you to speak the Welsh and Fae languages so beautifully? My gramma was from northern Wales, but I didn’t get to hear her speak much of the language.

Justine: Dani, thank you for the huge compliment!!! I had an Irish grandmother with a very pronounced, lilting accent and I do have somewhat pointy ears so I’d like to claim Fae blood, ha! I grew up overseas and would hear so many different accents and languages, they always seemed like the passport to enter into a secret world. I was inspired to then study and learn as many languages as I could…though Welsh was an exciting new realm for me.

Here’s a fun question for Justine, that both Viviana and I have been wondering… as a narrator, do you get “oh say it in ‘the voice’” question often?

Justine: Occasionally at dinner parties, I will be asked to do a voice…usually it comes down to broad accents, ‘oh, can you do the young Pakistani girl’ or ‘how do the Welsh Fae creatures sound?’ So, I then continue our conversation in that particular voice for awhile. See, invite me to a dinner and you aren’t getting just me, a whole coterie of Other World creatures are coming along too!

Dani, once the audiobook has been recorded, do you then listen to it or have final approval, or is it automatically done when it’s done recording?

Dani: When the audiobook is done, it’s done. I’m definitely anxious to listen to the finished product at the first opportunity, but it’s as a fan of Justine.

Dani, what do you love about having your novels in audiobook format?

Dani: I have a growing number of readers who have discovered just how convenient it is to be able to listen to a story while driving or performing other activities. (My personal favorites are listening to books while I exercise, and also at night when my eyes are too tired from writing to read anymore.) So I’m thrilled that my novels are available in audio format, and I hope they reach a wider audience because of it.

What I find especially interesting is that I experience the story differently when I hear someone narrate it rather than read it myself. This is even true with my very own novels! There are always nuances and details to be discovered through someone else’s interpretation. So I’m not surprised when readers tell me that they’ve read one of my books AND gotten an audio version to enjoy as well.

Justine, of all of Dani’s books, which one has been your favorite to narrate and why? Do you have any favorite characters so far?

51WQEWbwhqL._SL300_Justine: I have had the pleasure of narrating the three (so far) titles in the Grim series so that is a tough question, to pick a favorite. I do know that I was very giddy after reading the first book and I told my husband how much I loved being in this romantic, magical world. STORM BOUND had some of my favorite characters, I felt as though Brooke could have been a friend of mine and her rapport with her best friend, George, had me in stitches. I’d pause between takes so I could stop laughing and get my voice under control. So, George completely rocked my world, I will forever have a soft spot for the witticisms of Ranyon and as for Lurien, he embodies the haunting, alluring darkness of the fae kingdom.  I am an ardent believer in both true love and the possibility of there being a faery kingdom out there so for me to inhabit that world, three times, was a gift. Now I am waiting with the rest of Dani’s fans for book 4!!

Dani/Justine, if someone has not listened to any audio book before what would you tell them?

Dani:  I’d definitely encourage them to give audiobooks a try. Not only for the convenience, as I mentioned before, but for the sheer pleasure. I think there’s a child in all of us who still enjoys being read to. There’s simply nothing like it!

Justine: I love Dani’s answer! For a first-time audiobook listener, I would tell them to pick a story they are eager to read and then sit back and get ready to be transported. I am a voracious reader and I think audiobooks now make reading more accessible in so many ways – I have friends who spend even more time in their car because of audiobooks, they will drive around the block until the chapter finishes or pull up to their house and wait, breathless, for a moment when they can pause the tale. I think the combination of a great author/narrator bringing the story to life is magic indeed, ‘dontcha know’!

Ladies, it has been a pleasure and honor to have you on the blog today. And as a special treat to our readers here is a sample from Dani’s Storm Warned narrated by Justine Eyre. 

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Kelly reviews Storm Warned by Dani Harper

storm warnedTITLE: Storm Warned
SERIES #: Grim #3
CHARACTERS: Liam Cole & Caris Ellis
AUTHOR: Dani Harper
NARRATOR: Justine Eyre
RUN TIME: 10 Hours & 41 Minutes
PUBLICATION DATE: March 31, 2015
ORDER LINKS:Amazon| B&N | Audible

BOOK SYNOPSIS:
When Caris’s unearthly musical talent attracts the attention of the Wild Hunt, the Welsh farm girl is stolen away to serve as a faery grim, a herald of death. Two centuries later, she’s finally escaped back to the human world—and into the present-day life of a reclusive and heartbroken American musician.

Music was Liam’s whole life—until a crushing betrayal left him desperate to flee the public eye. Yet long-dormant passions awaken after a powerful storm strands a beautiful, strong-willed woman on his isolated farm. When a Fae prince bent on ruling both human and Faery realms threatens Caris’s life, Liam must decide if he can finally believe in love again, not just for her sake—but for the sake of two worlds.

From the best-selling author of Changeling Moon, this sweeping and passionate story of paranormal romance follows two souls from centuries apart who lost everything . . . and found that only love can save them

REVIEW:
One wickedly crazy prince trying to take over two world. One woman who just wants to be human again. One man who wants to be left alone with his broken heart.
Secrets will be revealed that will change the fabric of both the Nine Realms and the Mortal world.

In Storm Warned we get to meet Liam Cole an amazing musician who has everything going for him. That is until Liam’s world completely crumbles around him. Now he finds himself a recluse on his Uncle and Aunt’s farm and wants nothing to do with anyone.
Caris’ has lived for many years in a prison. A prison in the form of a Grim’s body. But when her captor leads a rogue hunt across a mortals farm, Caris see her chance to finally escape. As long as she doesn’t get caught.
Another great Grim story by Dani Harper. Liam and Caris are great. And we get to see some of our favorites from the first two books. Of course the Lord of the Wild Hunt, Lurien has some major page time in this book. Which leads me to hope beyond hope that Lurien’s book is next.

I had the great honor of listening to Storm Warned on audio book. The amazing Justine Eyre is will just amazing!! I love that Justine can take a great story and bring it to life for me. I am already looking forward to Justine reading Dani’s next Grim story to me.

If you have not checked out this series and like Fae mythology and lore you need to pick up book one Storm Warrior. And find out why the Fae should never be trusted.

Disclaimer:
I received a complimentary copy of this book from NetGalley & Montlake Romance in exchange for an honest review. This review is my own opinion and not a paid review.

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Writer’s Tips & Tricks Day 14 part a: How my desk got a dent in it by Dani Harper

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HOW MY DESK GOT A DENT IN IT – or The Importance of Editing

by Dani Harper, www.daniharper.com

Writing is one thing. Editing is another thing.

Most of my career was spent in communications, including radio, newspaper and magazines. After that I did something totally crazy and began writing fiction. In August, I finished my seventh novel, and started plotting number eight. If it sounds like I might have learned a thing or two about writing, I have.

I’ve learned the hard way that A GOOD WRITER DOESN’T TRY TO DO IT ALONE!

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Sure, I’m the person creating worlds on my laptop. But let me tell you, after I’ve stared at all that text on the screen for hours or days or weeks, my perspective isn’t worth spit. That’s why – both during and after the construction of a story – I can’t express enough THANKS to the people who fill the following roles in my writing life:

  1. BETA READERS
  2. STORY/CONCEPT EDITORS
  3. COPY EDITORS

These roles tend to overlap a lot – it’s tough to draw a definite line between them, or even title them properly, and some people wear more than one hat. Whatever you call them, the wonderful folks who do these jobs are dedicated to saving me from total embarrassment… er, I mean making sure that YOU have a pleasant reading experience. Actually, it’s the same thing.

THIS IS WHY –

An error in your novel can make you look unprofessional, sure, but that’s not the worst of it. A MISTAKE TAKES THE READER OUT OF THE STORY!  Whether your novel is like a pleasant Sunday drive or a white-knuckle roller coaster, you want the reader happily involved right to the very end. Something as pedestrian as a spelling mistake – or heaven help you, a hole in the plot – are like scattering nails on the pavement, or cutting the power to the amusement park. It interrupts the experience. Many promising stories are never finished or, if they are, they’re not fully appreciated, because the ride wasn’t smooth.

BETA READERS –

My first line of defense is my test audience, the Betas, and they have the unenviable job of reading the story IN PIECES. Here, please read this scene…. or this chapter…. or this segment of the book which I’ve now rewritten four times…. Their feedback is absolutely vital, and most it has to do with how they feel. Do you LIKE the characters? Is the world believable? Would someone really say this, or do that? Are there any bumps that “take you out of the story”? Is the ending satisfying?

STORY/CONCEPT EDITORS –

The story editor is like an engineer inspecting the STRUCTURE of the story, however. Does the anatomy of the novel hold up throughout? Is the pacing consistent? Is there a soggy middle? IS THERE A PLOT HOLE? Does the ending deliver what the beginning promised? Are the characters developed enough? Did the story follow the rules of the world the author built, was some detail forgotten, or did something go off the rails entirely (and if so, where?).

COPY EDITORS –

Grammar, punctuation, and spelling have to be inspected by a human eye. (Yup, your computer’s Spell Check not only doesn’t catch everything, sometimes it makes it WORSE – and it sure as heck can’t spell the Welsh and Fae languages in my stories.)

Like most writers, I have my personal punctuation demons too. I’m totally reliant on my copy editor to catch the incorrect usages of dashes and commas.

TO ERR IS HUMAN

Just because you’re striving for perfection doesn’t mean you’ll reach it, because you’re human, and your team is human. Despite the best efforts of everyone involved, it’s not only possible but likely that there’s still a mistake or two lurking in your story. Hopefully, it’s just a comma or a typo, but sometimes it’s bigger than that. After your novel comes out, you just might bang your head on the desk because something got overlooked.

Yup, my own desk has a large forehead-shaped dent in it. I wrote a story where no less than SIX people read the completed manuscript, and not a single person caught a major plot hole before it went to press.

To say that I was utterly mortified by that experience would be an understatement. I even wanted to quit writing for the first few days…. However, a good friend pointed out that such things have happened to the Big Dogs too, those writers whom I look up to and admire. If they could live through it, then so could I.

But here’s what I learned from that experience – NOT ALL EDITORS ARE CREATED EQUAL, and sometimes you haven’t got the right combination of skills on your team. I certainly had enough bodies per se – but I didn’t have a story/concept editor at that time. That’s where I made my mistake, and believe me, I’ve fixed that since.

Just because someone has hung out a shingle, doesn’t necessarily mean they’re a good editor – or a good editor for YOU. Not even if they used to work for a publisher (or still do). There are some fabulously gifted editors out there too, who have never been “trained”, but have an eye for story like Tony Stark has an eye for innovation. You might have to do some asking around, some testing and trying, before you find the right story editor for your work. This goes for Betas too. The trial and error can be painful, but this is like assembling an Avengers team – it’s gotta be the right combination of talents to be effective.

CONTEST –

Now that I’ve lectured you to death, here’s something FUN. I’m giving away a $20 Amazon gift card. (Open to US/Canada) To enter, just leave a comment, and I’ll choose a winner at random from the commenters on September 25th. (PS – Be sure to include an email address where I can reach you if you win!) Good luck, all!

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Let’s take a look at book 2 in Dani Harper’s Grim Series

Storm Bound

Grim #2

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From the bestselling author of Changeling Moon, this thrilling and sensual novel adds a new chapter to Dani Harper’s Celtic folklore–themed Grim Series.

Kidnapped on his wedding day in the twelfth century and forced into a thousand years of servitude by a cold-hearted faery princess, rugged blacksmith Aidan dreams of nothing but revenge on his captor. Then the spell of a beautiful witch awakens him to the present day—and a passionate desire. But to build a future, he must first confront his past…

Modern witch and magic-shop owner Brooke doesn’t think her life is missing anything, until a wayward enchantment lands a brooding medieval blacksmith in her spell room—and in her arms. Yet even after their passion proves to be truly magical, Aidan’s first commitment is to vengeance. Now Brooke must team up with friends and ancient warriors alike—and push her own powers to their limits—to save her love from the wrath of an evil fae

 

DANI HARPER AVATARA little about Dani:

“There isn’t anything Dani Harper likes better than exploring myth and legend – unless it’s writing sizzling and suspenseful fantasy. Of course, all of her stories have at least one foot firmly in the netherworld!”

Right now I’m bringing ancient Celtic mythology into modern-day America! The inspiration comes partly from my Welsh gramma, and partly from the many British storybooks I had as a child. I grew up on tales of the Fair Ones, the Fae, the Sidhe, and the Tylwyth Teg. So it seems natural to revisit that world as an adult. Plus, I get to write about one of my all-time favorite creatures – the Black Dog, herald of Death!  STORM WARRIOR and STORM BOUND are Books 1 and 2 of my new GRIM SERIES. Book 3 is STORM WARNED, and it’s on my editor’s desk as I write this.

To purchase the first two books in the Grim Series click on the title here:  Storm Warrior and Storm Bound

Learn more about Dani and her books here: WEBSITE | FACEBOOK | TWITTER or @Dani_Harper | BLOG  | NEWSLETTER SIGN-UP – (All subscribers are automatically entered in monthly giveaways!)  | AMAZON AUTHOR PAGE – (I’m always grateful for a “Like” on this page – it’s in the upper right)

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Make sure to check out all of the other stops on this month long tour HERE and enter the grand prize giveaway.

All winner’s will be picked at the end of the month and announce the 1st week of October. 
 

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Spotlight feature of Dani Harper’s Grimm Series

STORM WARRIOR

Grimm Series, Book 1

STORM WARRIOR, FIRST BOOK IN SERIES

Publisher: Montlake Romance

Publication Date:  August 6, 2013

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From the best-selling author of Changeling Moon, this stirring novel of passion and magic launches an addictive new series for fans of paranormal romance.

Enslaved for millennia by the masters of the Welsh faery realm, the fierce Celtic warrior Rhys is doomed to wander the earth forever. But when a brave beauty unwittingly breaks the enchantment, he is drawn into a strange new world…and an all-consuming desire.

Sensible Morgan doesn’t believe in magic—until a mysterious being saves her from a fate worse than death, and life as she knows it changes forever. Now the man of her dreams has become flesh and blood, igniting a spark in Morgan’s soul which science cannot explain. But even a love that transcends time may not be strong enough to withstand the power of an ancient curse.

Don’t forget to check out Kelly’s review of Storm Warrior HERE

 

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STORM BOUND

Grim Series, Book 2

STORM BOUND, FEATURE BOOK
Published by: Montlake Romance

Publication Date:  March 28, 2014

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Kidnapped on his wedding day in the twelfth century and forced into a thousand years of servitude by a cold-hearted faery princess, rugged blacksmith Aidan dreams of nothing but revenge on his captor. Then the spell of a beautiful witch awakens him to the modern world—and a passionate desire. But to build a future, he must first confront his past…

Modern witch and magic-shop owner Brooke doesn’t think her life is missing anything, until a wayward enchantment lands a brooding medieval blacksmith in her spell room—and in her arms. Yet even after their passion proves to be truly magical, Aidan’s first commitment is to vengeance. Now Brooke must team up with friends and ancient warriors alike—and push her own powers to their limits—to save her love from the wrath of an evil fae.

From the best-selling author of Changeling Moon, this thrilling and sensual novel adds a new chapter to Dani Harper’s Celtic folklore-themed Grim Series. Available in trade paperback, ebook and Audible.

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A little about Dani:

Dani Harper is a former newspaper editor whose passion for all things supernatural led her to a second career writing paranormal fiction. A longtime resident of the Canadian north and southeastern Alaska, Dani recently ventured south with her husband to rural Washington to be closer to their grown children. She is the author of Changeling MoonChangeling Dream, and Changeling Dawn, as well as First Bite, a Dark Wolf Story, and Storm Warrior, the first book in the Grim Series

Website:   http://daniharper.com/

Facebook:   https://www.facebook.com/Dani.Harper.Fan.Page

Twitter:   https://twitter.com/Dani_Harper

Goodreads:  https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/1357414.Dani_Harper

 

 


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GIVEAWAY TIME

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GRAND PRIZE:

A signed paperback copy of STORM BOUND, an MP3-CD of STORM WARRIOR, a set of the LLEWELLYN TAROT cards, a Celtic-style blank journal, a Celtic symbol pendant (pewter), a pewter magnet of a “black dog” (mastiff), plus a Dani Harper tote bag and swag.

RUNNERS UP:

10 runners up – Reader’s choice of a Kindle ebook from Dani’s backlist (Changeling Moon, Changeling Dream, Changeling Dawn, First Bite or Storm Warrior) Note – if you do not own a Kindle, Amazon provides a free app for your computer, iPad, or smartphone so you will be able to read this ebook.

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